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Elizabeth H. Cottrell's avatar

Fabulous…and delightful to read.

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Gael MacLean's avatar

Say what?

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John Cook's avatar

I Confess that I’ve only been aware of the term tautology for a few years. It was introduced to me as a comment on my own writing. I have the impression though that a tautology is something that states the obvious not something that is merely redundant. I for instance, think of the Paul Wellstone quote “we all do better when we all do better“ as a tautology that conveys meaning. My thought is that tautology can be a useful tool, whereas redundancy rarely is.

I do, however like “close proximity“ better as a descriptor, than “near miss“.

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Chris Hare's avatar

And why is “near miss” so often used, when “near hit” seems closer to the truth?

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Maryan Pelland's avatar

You make good points. I would, however, say that redundancy expertly used can be valuable. You’ve nailed both definitions—the saying of the same thing twice in different words, generally considered to be a fault of style (e.g., they arrived one after the other in succession). And a statement that is true by necessity or by virtue of its logical form.

"all logical propositions are reducible to either tautologies or contradictions"

Great comment!

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Posy Churchgate's avatar

Excellent advice from Malky - I've started trimming some out, but I still have a way to go.

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Charles Bastille's avatar

Guilty as charged, I'm sure. Nice reminders. Hopefully, I will not be able to unsee mine in the future. Many common phrases are tautological, so I blame people who talk too much for spreading the disease.

Sometimes I dismiss Grammarly's underlining of "own" to piss it off, especially when it underlines all my instances of "really."

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Maryan Pelland's avatar

I laughed out loud at the comment about Grammarly. I’m not convinced the bots care what we think. Except that more and more, they grovel and apologize when I point out their hallucinations.

BTW, I don’t necessarily object to the word “own” for clarity or emphasis. Used judiciously, it can be effective. “Really” is another thing altogether. :)

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Charles Bastille's avatar

Really? 😀

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David Pepper's avatar

Great Stuff!! I love the removal of "own" or using it in a better format when writing. Really insightful. Thanks for the great content. David

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Maryan Pelland's avatar

All credit goes to the writer, my good friend Malky McEwan. He is an amazing writer.

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David Perlmutter's avatar

Good advice here- it's helpful to know this.

In Canada, journalists are sometimes guilty of saying "the NDP Party"- the acronym stands for New Democratic Party, so the use of "party" is redundant in this case.

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Maryan Pelland's avatar

We all do that kind of thing a lot—there’s so much alphabet soup in life that we can’t keep up with what it all stands for :)

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