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Franca Bartholomew's avatar

Yikes, this hits home. I am still grappling with drawing pictures instead of telling a story. I was on the beach in the first orbituary, but sat with my laptop at home reading the second. Quite effective comparisons on writing.

Maryan Pelland Pen2Profit's avatar

Thanks! It does make the point!

According to Mimi's avatar

Brilliant example. I was disappointed when the first excerpt ended, wanting to know more.

Maryan Pelland Pen2Profit's avatar

Google the bagpiper guy to find the entire obit.

According to Mimi's avatar

Thank you!